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Without A Sound

Ch:
As I cry without a sound,
All my tears cannot be found.
When you were here, I was something,
Now you're gone, I am nothing.

V1:

Gently I touched your face,
That time when nothing approached my mind.
In all your elegance, your effort to seduce,
Your powers to confuse me...(break)
Allude me...(louder slightly)

(slower, gradual build up)
Bridge:
So I sit back, and see where you take me...
Please don’t hurt me again...

Ch:
As I cry without a sound,
All my tears cannot be found.
When you were here, I was something,
Now you're gone, I am nothing.

V2:
I feel this room closing in around me,
Suffocating my feelings, consuming me.
I hope you can see, pick me up and save me,
Let me find my
Inner harmony…

Bridge:
So I sit back, and see where you take me...
Please don’t hurt me again...

Ch:
As I cry without a sound,
All my tears cannot be found.
When you were here, I was something,
Now you're gone, I am nothing.

Mid8th:
Tormented in my head,
With the words that weren’t said,
My heart left for dead.
I know that I could heal,
That I was something real,
But now my heart bleeds…

To feel.

Bridge:
So I sit back, and see where you take me...
Please don’t hurt me again...

Ch:
As I cry without a sound,
All my tears cannot be found.
When you were here, I was something,
Now you're gone, I am nothing.
©2006-2010 ~feartherighteous
:iconfeartherighteous:

Author's Comments

The original of this one was inspired by Dead-Doormouse 's ".without.a.sound." but the original lyrics never really worked. So I scraped that one, and with the help of the wonderful silent-surrender, who really did an amazing job, we came up with this from the original chorus. I really, really like how this turned out!

Enjoy and comments welcome.

Comments


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:iconsilent-surrender:
Wow sounds so much better now.

privileged to work with you.

any time :):hug:

xxxx

--
Sell Your Computer, Buy a Guitar.

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natasha
:iconfeartherighteous:
Aye, and you too ;), thankies very much!

--
I'm a cynical optimist..."
:iconsilent-surrender:
dont even metion it

will do some more soon

xxxxx :w00t!:

--
Sell Your Computer, Buy a Guitar.

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natasha
:iconfeartherighteous:
Definately! :)

--
I'm a cynical optimist..."
:icondead-doormouse:
*feels special* Sorry I never replied to your last comment on that one, I was ment to ask Heather or Sam , but kinda forgot, lol

I like it too. It seems to have a simple feeling to it, although it's complicated for some people, I likes <3

--
"Two hearts? Oh baby, I'm beating out a samba!" - David Tennant
:iconsocietiessin:
are we going to hear this as an audio presentation?

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may it be a rock or a grain of sand, in water they both sink the same
:iconfeartherighteous:
Glad you like it! I was hopeing that you would, considering it is based on your piece and that in the lyrics slient-surrender and myself would do it justice. And thankies for the fav, much appreciated :hug:!

--
I'm a cynical optimist..."
:iconfeartherighteous:
Hopefully soon, lol! If we can then I would really like to do it, and plus it would be what we are heading towards: melodic yet powerful, not fast-paced eitheexactly slow but not r. Have a go at trying to come up with something, but I want to use my 7 string!!!! lol, if you're up for it that is?

--
I'm a cynical optimist..."

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