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Aftermath

I walk this path alone,
The leaves flutter by,
Rustling, shimmering,
Flying with the wind.

The cold winter air
Fresh on my face,
My breath projected
As I walk alone.

Loss and consequences,
Rights and wrongs,
Why, who, when and for what?
Questions I want to ask.

A tear trickles down my cheek
That once felt your touch,
Your hand, your lips,
Your love…

The sky darkens,
Street lamps flicker on,
My feet rack the gravel
As I kick it in pain.

What went wrong?
Was I too selfish,
Uncaring or cold?
What did I do?

I know you won’t come back,
But know this: my heart,
Is shattered in a thousand pieces.
It reflects my own hurt,
And haunts me as I walk…

This figure walks condemned,
As leaves whirl around him,
He is just a shell of himself:

His soul has left him.
©2006-2010 ~feartherighteous
:iconfeartherighteous:

Author's Comments

You have to listen to "Loss and Consequences" from the Lord of War Soundtrack to get the feeling I was going for in this one, doesn't really matter though. Not many people will talk about the effect of a break up, what goes through their head or how they feel. I don't know personally, but I have tried to interpret it in my own way. Comments welcome.

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:iconsilent-surrender:
you work with words so fluently
i am always enraptured by what you have to write....

wow...

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Sell Your Computer, Buy a Guitar.

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natasha
:iconfeartherighteous:
Thankies very much ;)! Always appreciated!

--
I'm a cynical optimist..."
:iconelybuendia:
I have to agree with natasha..this is fluent...and eloquent.^^

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:damphyr: "Love is like telling a girl you like her smile and she wears it everyday."
:iconfeartherighteous:
Thank you! :)

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I'm a cynical optimist..."

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